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Winter 2012 Haiku Set

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December 27, 2012
Winter 2012 Haiku Set by ~RedDragonfly is a spectacular example of the calming nature of haikus. A haiku does not need to follow a 5-7-5 syllable pattern and the form is wonderfully executed here.
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12-6
cats in the hall
shifting to find
the last afternoon light

12-7
all day the old cat
follows a spot of sun
down the hall

12-8
all my raked leaves
now a pile
at the back door

12-10
cold wind
street empty
a faceless penny

12-12
a cat's balance-
if you stop petting me,
I'll fall

12/21
rusted clouds
seventy miles per hour
towards the coming dawn
A winter set.
EDIT: Wow, I had such a busy January with a very sick horse that I never even noticed I got a DD! Thank you so much!
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1000Themes's avatar
This is so cool !!!!

Haha i loved it xD

especially the faceless penny and the falling cat lol