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49 for Jade-Pandora:
numb feet
in the cold surf
48 for RetroZombie:
tracked to a farm stand-
the smell of strawberries
47 for SedahLiah:
licking my fingers
to snuff the candles
46 for BerylAlexandros:
Orion above the desert
I hug my father goodbye
45 for Chugglepuff:
smoldering cigarette
thread of white smoke
44 for DeathCAS:
just out of the shower
rain on the roof
43 for TimeFlies:
before dawn
the streets are empty
except for snow
42 for Formel:
my father on the phone
talking back-to-school
41 for PoisonedKitty:
her happiness
starting to show
round belly
40 for MReid973:
anniversary dinner
blister from new high heels
39 for Jtimshel:
hurrying down
lightning
behind parachuters
38 for Angelwings-goldhalo:
traffic stopped
cameras out
bighorn sheep crossing
37 for GwenavhyeurAnastasia:
hospital waiting room
reading the same page
over and over
36 for Utanapishtim:
wind snatches
the car door
denting the Jaguar
35 for Saiun:
twilight
white dog running
through shadows
34 for MentalPsycho:
dawn
kettle whistle
stops the clock ticking
33 for Phoneix-Faerie:
trash truck
tremendous trembling
32 for RLkirkland:
tidepool mornings bloom with color
31 for Nikibelia:
kissing cousins
bindweed
in the morning glories
30 for Iscariot-Priest:
clandestine meeting
kisses smell like gasoline
29 for Aqua-Rat:
a few red crabapples
decorate the summer tree
28 for ToaAkatsuki:
rush hour stillness
not a car moves
27 for LaRubi:
cloudy morning
roses full of rain
26 for Amertie:
last night's tears
only stains on the pillow today
25 for GaioumonBatou:
fire on the mountain
all the neighbors watching
24 for Djoseph:
slicing a peach
onto my cornflakes
23 for Koori-Bara:
rain lessens
and thunder rolls away
22 for Erinyx:
my childhood home
remodeled and repainted
21 for Xorac:
stubborn moon
blocking my view
of the dipper
20 for Esin:
broken sprinkler
a blessing on the hot street
19 for Neenjaah:
new tattoo
peeling like a blue sunburn
18 for ForWinds:
a lot of wishes-
among the pennies
my quarter settles
17 for Laurence55:
bad TV show
filmed in my home town
I watch it all
16 for Mooshu17:
getting dark
only my feet are warm
in the sand
15 for Tina-go-lightly:
sweet pine wind
touch me more
14 for McDermid:
behind the painting
cobwebs
13 for Mahi-Fish:
the voice to keep me company B.B. King
12 for Solarts:
newlyweds clicking his ring on the hotel counter
11 for ColdContact Kiss:
almost dawn
chamomile tea
didn't help me sleep
10 for PardonM3:
at sunrise
the cactus flowers
fold away
9 for Wyane380:
in the waves
gurgles
a Pepsi can
8 for CollectorsCaravan:
blinking away the sunlight
after a long matinee
7 for Kiki-hiraku:
all morning still mad
at what he said
in my dream
6 for Tegaux:
summer on the mountain-
snowing on my ice cream
5 for Whatevercomestomind:
half a lime left
to be cleaned up
in the morning
4 for InsideRuby:
freeway bridge
above the red river
3 for BoundlessGravity:
blue dragonfly shining needle-thin
2 for Sano-Balron:
Do you hear
a piano playing
in the haunted hotel
1 for Aoi-Sekirei:
little gems
watching me
tidepool snails
numb feet
in the cold surf
48 for RetroZombie:
tracked to a farm stand-
the smell of strawberries
47 for SedahLiah:
licking my fingers
to snuff the candles
46 for BerylAlexandros:
Orion above the desert
I hug my father goodbye
45 for Chugglepuff:
smoldering cigarette
thread of white smoke
44 for DeathCAS:
just out of the shower
rain on the roof
43 for TimeFlies:
before dawn
the streets are empty
except for snow
42 for Formel:
my father on the phone
talking back-to-school
41 for PoisonedKitty:
her happiness
starting to show
round belly
40 for MReid973:
anniversary dinner
blister from new high heels
39 for Jtimshel:
hurrying down
lightning
behind parachuters
38 for Angelwings-goldhalo:
traffic stopped
cameras out
bighorn sheep crossing
37 for GwenavhyeurAnastasia:
hospital waiting room
reading the same page
over and over
36 for Utanapishtim:
wind snatches
the car door
denting the Jaguar
35 for Saiun:
twilight
white dog running
through shadows
34 for MentalPsycho:
dawn
kettle whistle
stops the clock ticking
33 for Phoneix-Faerie:
trash truck
tremendous trembling
32 for RLkirkland:
tidepool mornings bloom with color
31 for Nikibelia:
kissing cousins
bindweed
in the morning glories
30 for Iscariot-Priest:
clandestine meeting
kisses smell like gasoline
29 for Aqua-Rat:
a few red crabapples
decorate the summer tree
28 for ToaAkatsuki:
rush hour stillness
not a car moves
27 for LaRubi:
cloudy morning
roses full of rain
26 for Amertie:
last night's tears
only stains on the pillow today
25 for GaioumonBatou:
fire on the mountain
all the neighbors watching
24 for Djoseph:
slicing a peach
onto my cornflakes
23 for Koori-Bara:
rain lessens
and thunder rolls away
22 for Erinyx:
my childhood home
remodeled and repainted
21 for Xorac:
stubborn moon
blocking my view
of the dipper
20 for Esin:
broken sprinkler
a blessing on the hot street
19 for Neenjaah:
new tattoo
peeling like a blue sunburn
18 for ForWinds:
a lot of wishes-
among the pennies
my quarter settles
17 for Laurence55:
bad TV show
filmed in my home town
I watch it all
16 for Mooshu17:
getting dark
only my feet are warm
in the sand
15 for Tina-go-lightly:
sweet pine wind
touch me more
14 for McDermid:
behind the painting
cobwebs
13 for Mahi-Fish:
the voice to keep me company B.B. King
12 for Solarts:
newlyweds clicking his ring on the hotel counter
11 for ColdContact Kiss:
almost dawn
chamomile tea
didn't help me sleep
10 for PardonM3:
at sunrise
the cactus flowers
fold away
9 for Wyane380:
in the waves
gurgles
a Pepsi can
8 for CollectorsCaravan:
blinking away the sunlight
after a long matinee
7 for Kiki-hiraku:
all morning still mad
at what he said
in my dream
6 for Tegaux:
summer on the mountain-
snowing on my ice cream
5 for Whatevercomestomind:
half a lime left
to be cleaned up
in the morning
4 for InsideRuby:
freeway bridge
above the red river
3 for BoundlessGravity:
blue dragonfly shining needle-thin
2 for Sano-Balron:
Do you hear
a piano playing
in the haunted hotel
1 for Aoi-Sekirei:
little gems
watching me
tidepool snails
To thank all those who finished the Haikuthon for July 2009,
I'm going to write a haiku/senryu inspired by each complete set (20 or more poems). There will be almost 50 of them I expect- it might take me all of August.
Anyway, many thanks to my fellow participants, all of you from expert to first-time haiku writers!
36. Yes this is a true story. A friend's, though, not mine.
8/21/09 Finished. It was very inspiring to read everyone's works again and write something in response.
I'm going to write a haiku/senryu inspired by each complete set (20 or more poems). There will be almost 50 of them I expect- it might take me all of August.
Anyway, many thanks to my fellow participants, all of you from expert to first-time haiku writers!
36. Yes this is a true story. A friend's, though, not mine.
8/21/09 Finished. It was very inspiring to read everyone's works again and write something in response.
© 2009 - 2024 RedDragonfly
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Ah, very nice idea! I love each and every piece of haiku!
Great work!
Great work!