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My dragonfly notebook with raw haiku notes about Tuesday's adventures. Good luck with my handwriting.
Background is the the vet bill and some other horse bills and identification papers.

Here are the haiku, ordered chronologically and edited a bit.


I whistle
but the horse doesn't come-
blood covers her face

Every approaching car
is again not the vet's

Another emergency call-
I dial the phone for the vet
while she sutures

Once the blood is cleaned up,
all the watchers vanish.

Sedation wearing off-
slowly she blinks,
and steals a cookie off the table

My unemployment check
straight into the hand of the vet

After everything is done
check written, blood cleaned, horse freed-
then I start to shake

"How much?"
my husband doesn't ask on the phone
and I can't tell him



I'd like to enter the contest by :iconmoyanii:
with something more "poetic"- but these are really
an accurate capture of my Tuesday afternoon.

CCT
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Thank you to Siragiku-sensei and MoyanII
for the gift haiku and translation

Haiku Tuesday by ~RedDragonfly
五月雨や句帳の中は青の青
samidare ya kuchou no naka wa ao no ao

rain in may-
blue on blue
in the haiku memo.

this one seems a little melancholic.
rainy season in may tends to make one feel blue. of course, the dragonfly notebook in the photo has sky-blue pages and has haiku written in blue ink!
and, a hurt pet horse certainly add a tint of worry and moodiness to the atmosphere.

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:iconmoyanii:
yes. vet is expensive, you're telling me. cats are cheaper than horse, but still...:faint:

i suppose your horse is well already? since he/she can steal a cookie from the table.

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~secret study~
~silent studio~
:iconaqua-rat:
I'm sad to hear you had to go through all that trouble with your horse. But the haiku are real and raw and not simply artifice. I like your handwriting and the fact that you have a dragonfly notebook.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconreddragonfly:
...at least I had the money, even if I was hoping to use it for something else.

Sirah is feeling better already, she was never as pained as the time when she broke her nose. So I expect despite the damage this was not a kick wound.

She's worth it, it's just stressful.

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
:iconreddragonfly:
Thank you, she is doing well and healing up nicely. Moyan asked for raw emotion haiku and some of these fit. I wanted to write some thing peaceful on my nice green paper - I might enter again- but this is my experience of the week.

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
:iconaqua-rat:
I am happy to hear she is doing well and is better.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconbogbrush:
I'm glad that this competition has started, it's fascinating to see other people's notebooks and I do hope your horse if getting better. A hind leg wound is it from the picture in the bottom right?

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Ethics? That's the place north of London init?
:iconreddragonfly:
No, it's right smack on the face. very messy but she's doing well.

Her leg always looks like that- it's just a very tall stocking!

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.
:iconanavah:
I love it! It's genuine! :heart:

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Thank you.
:iconreddragonfly:
I see... you were looking at her Brand Inspection papers- that just shows her markings written in red, showing that big hind stocking... It is kind if scary looking.

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Things need not have happened to be true. Tales and dreams are the shadow-truths that will endure when mere facts are dust and ashes, and forgot.

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